Re: NON-COMMERCIAL SITE
by Virginia Blalock <virginia(at)visionsnet.com>
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At 12:22 AM 10/25/99 , Fernando P=E9rez Valdez wrote:
>URL http://www.prodigyweb.net.mx/fpvaldez/club_rotario_jurica.htm=3D20
Hello!
The pages I have looked at so far load quickly and the basic look is fine.=
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One thing I noticed right away though was all the type centered. Take out=20
the centering of the text. It looks bad.
Also, on the first page, I would put the flag before or after the title of=
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the site instead of right in the middle.
Put the literacy banner at the bottom of the page. It is not good to have a=
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banner taking people away from a site before people even have a chance to=20
get to the navigation of your site. Your goal should be to keep people=20
right where they are-your site. I see this banner goes to a page on your=20
site, but what I am talking about here is general FYI. People should be=20
able to see the navigation easily with little or no scrolling IMO.
The navigation itself is fine. I would perhaps instead of those bullets=20
next updated pages have a "what's new" page and there list what pages and=20
other things have changed on your site. This is a particularly good idea if=
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you content changes regularly.
Take all the extra junk off from around the counter. The counter is mainly=
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for the webmaster anyway, so I would make counters, trackers and the like=20
as inconspicous as possible. You seem to have a large area taken up for=
them.
On your "Service Avenures" page you can add VALIGN=3D"TOP" to your TD tags=
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and the descriptions will look better beside the graphics.
Also, keep design elements consistent. For example I saw a couple of=20
different background graphics. Choose one and keep it as the background=20
graphic throughout your site.
Overall, this is a pretty good non-commercial site. Good luck!
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