Well Laura,

That's a very intense page you have there.  Even a little challenging for
some.  your choice of colours I believe is appropriate (though too many
purists will disagree with the black background - don't ask me why).  You've
obviously spent a good deal of thought and effort in getting your page the
way it is, and as a result, the 'feel' is very good - we get to know you in
part very well.

Content-wise, of course I can suggest nothing, and presentation-wise, you've
already done a great job.

Ben Hillier
Ergon Energy
http://www.ergon.com.au/
mailto:benjamin.hillier(at)ergon.com.au


> -----Original Message-----
> From:	Laura Ryan [SMTP:dpryan(at)iol.ie]
> Sent:	Friday, September 18, 1998 6:14 AM
> To:	HWG
> Subject:	Please review personal website
> 
> Hello,
> 
> Could you please review a personal home page at http://surf.to/lauras.home
> and
> give me any advice/criticism you may have.
> 
> Thanks in advance.
> -- 
> Laura Ryan, laura(at)tipperary.ddns.org
> 
> http://surf.to/lauras.home

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