Lane's PlayHouse and...

Re: Critique Lane's PlayHouse 

I came to one "splash screen" and then went to main.htm.  It all loaded
quickly and the outline was nice. I do agree the rainbow is a little bright
under the text .gifs, but not that bad.
The page was outlined nice, but might be interesting to have a little "teaser
text" about "the playground" and  "field trips" to make 'em want to click on.
What is there doesn't explain much.
I am using AOL browser but will later mark the site and play your games in
Netscape. As suggested, you might want to mention what ages are appropriate
for this site,  if even to make a kid feel like it's "just for them". Maybe
put what ages the kids that wrote the stories were.
You have a great start. Looking forward to seeing it grow.

And while I have someone's attention...

I just started an online ad for a guy selling island property. I usually view
my pages on two computers with very different monitors and browser versions,
but my motherboard is sick in my PC so it's resting. I have two images on this
page that are aligned right and left with text in the middle. If someone could
be so kind as to give it a look and tell me if they see the text as "broken
up" because of the alignment of the images.
the URL:
<A HREF="http://www.shadoworks.com/grenada">http://www.shadoworks.com/grenada
</A>
(The images are not his, only temporary)

Thanks,
EA
shdowrks(at)aol.com

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