RE: alpha critique Words at Work advertising

by Pedro Paulo Gaeschlin Rego <PPaulo(at)americel.com.br>

Date:	Thu, 21 May 1998 11:00:10 -0300
To:	"'WordsAtWork'" <studio(at)wordsatwork.com.au>, hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
	todo: View Thread, Original

	 > Dear list members,


	 > Please critique this site on the merits of:


	 > - is the site too basic?
	I don't think so. The Logo is very beautiful, the red frame is
also very good.

	  > - load time
	Everything loaded fast execpt the section "Our quick pitch".

> - aesthetic style
	Your site is good. I would only make some adjustments:
	- Reduce the superior frame with the logo to fit tight the logo
and the navigation bar.

	- Change the colors of the navigation bar, maybe black letters
with red dots...

	- Try to make the "Our quick pitch" more understandable (or more
"friendly")

	  

> - etc.
	I found errors when trying to load the others section. The
changed the red frame on the left but the inferior frame appears "didn't
find URL". Maybe this is a local problem, but anyway, check it.

	MSIE 3.05


> Any responses would be great. This is URGENT!
> 
> 
> The site is at:
> 
> 
> http://www.wordsatwork.com.au/ALPHA
> 
> 
> Kind regards,
> Matthew Hayward.
> http://yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au/~rickman

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