Hi.

I like your content a lot!  The one suggestion I have content wise is that 
you put in a little something to tie the otherwise unrelated content 
together.  In other words, expand that first sentance on the home page into a 
paragraph that says:
 - this is who I am
 - this is my relationship to the topics I present
 - this is why I made a web page to present them

I'd recommend making the navigation links larger and perhaps putting them in 
a table or otherwise structuring them so that they stand out a bit better.  
You need a way to get back to the home page from the various content pages.  
Also, I'm not sure I like the fact that border images change from page to 
page.  If you want to keep that, then make the images that change smaller and 
create a consistent framework for them so there is more that stays the same 
from page to page. 

A few of the links are confusing:
 - what are the links from the veena image and where do they go?
 - blues clues links is in the list that seems to be attached to bob's 
builder
 - What is the valid suggestions about schools link?  It and the page it 
leads to are confusing and out of place.
 - "Hobby" in the navigation could be changed to "gardening"

----->Nathan


1/7/2003 2:41:26 PM, "Balaji, Geetha" <GBalaji(at)dor.ca.gov> wrote:

>Sorry I forgot the link.  Here it is:
>http://www28.brinkster.com/geomy/HTML%20II/Week2-home.html
>
>Thanks
>Geetha.
>GBalaji(at)DOR.CA.GOV
>
>
>
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