Re: critique please

by Lorrie Eldridge <lorrie652(at)icehouse.net>

Date:	Sat, 5 Oct 2002 17:51:07 -0700
To:	Heather Quinn <hgquinn(at)attglobal.net>
Cc:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
References:	Laptop attglobal
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Hi Heather,

>You've done a great job in refocusing the "flavor" of your main page's content to convey a sense of calm, professional competence and self-confidence.  The revision also made your product offerings crystal clear.  The visitor knows that you know what you're doing and what you can do for them right away.  The intense focus of the content on your message has also lifted the energy level of the page.

Thanks much. I'm still not done incorporating all the suggestions. Haven't even had time to check out Mario's web sites and suggestions re line graphics which I intend to do. I have the JS mouseovers ready to reload but want to wait till later as it may make the site unnavigable if there are bugs in it which there usually are.

> Your writing skills are outstanding!

thanks. BA in English :o)

I appreciate everyone's help.

Lori

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