Re: http://www.tynees.8m.com

The background and such looks nice, so far the animations are a bit much for a
professional web designer.  To get business, you have to be able to create
your own graphics or be able to scan in what the people want.  Or if you are
lucky like some people, you have friends who are great at designing graphics
and will do so for free with giving them the credits.

The Money page ... other than personally seeing people get ripped off by
MLMing and such, I didn't care for it.  The text went off the page in the
right columns and that needs to be fixed, no one wants to scroll side to side
simply to read something.  You also forgot to put your links to the other
pages at the bottom like you have on the first page and the Store page.

On the Links page ... your Banner has misspellings...a graphic doesn't work
... and what are the text areas for?  I see NO HTML Text for the banners...
You've spelled "animated" ( I suppose that's what it is?) as animaged....

I've had 2 JavaScript errors.  Site map did NOT show on the site map page.

I didn't bother going to the guestbook.

I have Nothing against LE and such, being as I am a member of LE, it has
helped me out a lot with designing and such, also they have a section called
Dr. Design, you may wish to look there for ideas.

If you need any sort of help with HTML, I recommend Laura Lemay's Teach
yourself web publishing using HTML 4.0 in 14 days...  It's my HTML Bible ...
so to speak.

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