Got a javascript error on your page: document.aboutus is not an object -
line 44 (two errors) caused by the fact your image is named about and not
aboutus

Onmouseover pictures are not preloaded.  Alt text on about us picture is
"projects" 

Couldn't find something else.  Just one thing... consider using a
non-standard font and consider defining other colours for the links.

Very clean and straightforward page, but stylish.  Like it a lot!


Kayjey


-----Oorspronkelijk bericht-----
Van: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
[mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]Namens Emily Berk
Verzonden: donderdag 19 april 2001 3:49
Aan: hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
Onderwerp: critique please (http://www.earlychildpro.org/)


Hi Sandy:

I think the site is nice.  It loaded fast (I'm on a cable modem, but the 
photos loaded fast and they are very clear).

I like the way they change color.

My nits:

1.  Navigation.  I'd like one more photo, a To-Home photo.

2.  The one on the left never DID change color on mouse-over, however.

3.  I get a Javascript error when I point the mouse below-and-between the 
photos.

--Emily

On Mon, 9 Apr 2001 12:26:47 -0700 (PDT), Sandy Clausen 
<sandyclausen(at)excite.com> wrote:

 > recently completed the following web site for a non profit organization.
I am waiting for input from the client with some minor revisions but wanted
to get a wider range of feed back, loading times, browser viewable,
navigation...
Here is the url:
http://www.earlychildpro.org/

Thanks for your input.


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