Critique for http://home.earthlink.net/~jgillen/

I offered to build a web page as a Christmas present to my daughter's
Godfather. I've been lurking and re-doing these pages since January. I
still have META TAGS that shoo instead of beckon the robots, but now that I
*think* I've gotten the HTML straight, all opinions and suggestions are
welcome.

I'd rather be cut to ribbons by you folks than by business associates of my
dear friend!

Just got got my first graphics programs in March, so if you folks give me
the HTML go-ahead, I'll start working on the decorations in earnest. If you
have time, I'd appreciate it if you'd also check out the "Gambits" link
from my pages.

TIA,
Joan Gillen
mailto:jgillen(at)earthlink.net

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