Re: Critique my site please.

Hi Paul,

Overall not bad.  Personally I think you have gone overboard with little
Icons such as the animated e-mail one (which is a bit of a cliche) and 'Made
with a Mac' etc.

The following are some more criticisms

- Tested at 14.4k/800x600 high color, from Melb Australia using Win 95 and
Netscape 4.  A tad slow worth the wait
- that tye dye heading of the first page is just tacky.  It is not a
question of taste
- the buttons on the menu frame would look a bit better if they were closer
together.  Less scrolling.

Otherwise good.

Kind regards,
Matt Hayward.
http://yoyo.cc.monash.edu.au/~rickman


-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Smith <prsmith(at)raptor.lethbridgec.ab.ca>
To: hwg-critique(at)hwg.org <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Date: Thursday, April 16, 1998 5:04 AM
Subject: Critique my site please.


>Hey all,
>
>I've done a some work to my page as was wondering if I could get some
>feedback.  Any insight and input would be greatly appreciated.
>
>Paul
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>efficiently.
>
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