Re: Please critique

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----- Original Message -----
From: "Toller" <toller(at)ntlworld.com>
To: "David Pippen" <gadale(at)earthlink.net>; "hwg-critique"
<hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, June 20, 2000 1:05 PM
Subject: Re: Please critique


> Dear David,
>
> I am sorry but I find this page very confusing!
> Is this a church site or a commercial one? It looks like a commercial site
> so why does it mention a church?
> I also find this number of very bright colours alarming - somehow there is
> nothing to latch on to, to help me feel safe and secure, so I am afraid
that
> it would actually put me off buying anything.... ;)
>
> In your coding, might I suggest you add an alt attribute and dimensions
for
> the computer graphic? It would also help if you could attend to the messy
> code (and remove all the unnecessary junk) produced by Front Page (see
>
http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.georgia-dale-specialty.co
> m%2Fclients%2Fnopc.html) .
>
> Cheers,
>
> Jenny
>
>
>
>

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