Re: Over 30 Enterprises

> Could you please take a look at: http://www.over30enterprise.com/


Hi Carrie,
Nice site.  I love the way the green panel scrolls down, care to divulge
your secret on that?  I saw the preload script but I didn't see what make
the panel roll down.  I want to mention a couple of things:

1.  I believe you are using the meta title incorrectly, but I'm sure other's
on the list will correct me if I am wrong.  I personally use a simple title
for each page such as  "Over 30 Enterprises Jewelry products"  and then use
both meta keywords and meta keyword descriptions (this is where I would
place what you have in the meta title).

2.  The site needs a tad more color IMHO.  The colors you have go very
nicely together but I'd add something now with a splash more color.  It
would be great to add some images of your products throughout the site as a
"teaser" instead of forcing people to drill down to get to view any of them.
Remember, this is what you are selling, make me want it as soon as I open
your door.  I think I'd also let people see by textual reference that your
little images are clickable as I had to go back and look.

3.  Some of the pages, such as products have too much white space (not
something I say very often as most people try to put everything on the page
and cramp it in.

You are that design knack and have done a nice job, now just liven things up
a bit.

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> Could you please take a look at: http://www.over30enterprise.com/

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