Re: Critique of Update Online Requested

The site is solid, the main problems I have with it are:

1. It is long, all on one page. you have several sections,
which could be separate pages. then just have a highlight
or two from some of the sections on the front page along
with the main story or whatever.

2. It is linear and all centered, with little visual
interest. I would consider making it more like a real
newspaper, with teasers about articles inside, with
multiple columns, with an index that is easily found.

have fun,

Luke

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                - ( luke opperman ) -
     Spigot Graphics, Cohesive Design for the Web
          - ( http://spigot.hypermart.net/ ) -  

-- ..some tiny cows, two brushstrokes each,
       but confidently cows.. - 'Poem' by Elizabeth Bishop




---Wayne Fisher <waynef(at)cyberenet.net> wrote:
>
> Good afternoon all:
> 
> In the past, I have requested a critique of the Update
Online site
> (http://www.gaywired.com/update), which is an online gay
and lesbian
> news magazine for the San Diego area.  I received some
very helpful
> feedback, and performed a lot of cleanup on the site
based upon your
> feedback.
> 
> Anyone willing to take a look (once again) at the
finished product and
> let me know if I missed anything that still should be
cleaned up?
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Wayne
> 
> 
> 

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