Re: please critique pages (Beaming Geek)

>i'd appreciate any feedback i can receive about the following pages:
>http://www.concentric.net/~lemming9/whitedragon.html
>http://www.concentric.net/~lemming9/beaminggeek.html

I looked at the second page. I like it! A lot. I think you've got the theme
down pat; definitely makes me think "beaming geek".  :-)

The only criticism I have is on the Services page. When I first read the
text at the top with the geek's head in the middle, my natural inclination
was to read completely across the screen (and the head) left to right. It
didn't make sense, so I tried again. It still didn't make sense. That's
when I realized it was in columns. If very many other people report this
stumbling block, you may want to rethink that design.

A final comment, this one general. I visited your personal page. As a
potential customer, I would think twice about doing business with a company
who uses copyrighted images (presumably) without permission. I'm referring
of course to Poindexter, the Cat in the Hat, Felix, etc.  How would I know
that the images you use to create my website won't get me into legal
trouble? It's just something to think about.

Viewing with...
Win 95; Netscape 4.04, default font Souvenir Lt BT, 12 pt;
28.8 dial-up connection; 17-inch monitor, 1024 x 768.

Bev Parks  =^.^=  cloudbow(at)primenet.com
http://www.cloudbow.com
http://www.bayside.net/users/cbsites/

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