More on: First small-scale commercial project site check, please?

by Roger Stenning <roger(at)isg.abel.co.uk>

 Date:  Mon, 15 Feb 1999 05:05:43 +0000
 To:  hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
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Hi all!

Following the VERY successful request (Thanks to everyone who responed so
VERY quickly! - I replied to you all off list) for a review of my first
commercial website venture, I've now put into place all the suggestions
that were made to me.

The test site URL is (still) at:
	http://www.abel.net.uk/~isg/socom/index.html

Could you possibly have another look, and let me know how I've done, this
time around, please?

I'd like to know if the problems encountered before have been solved,
particularly:

1) Is the text more readable with the new hue (coo! it rhymes!) of BGCOLOUR
element?
2) Likewise, now I'm using the TABLE elements on every page, is the text
still running off the edge of the pages, as some reported to me?
3) Is the use of the additional graphics suitable, and likely to enhance or
detract from the site?
4) Does the site still match up with the brief I was given (see the "About
This website" link)?

I would still, of course, appreciate any comments on the site, generally or
specifically.

FWIW, I've checked this site under Win'95B NS 4.x and IE4.x, so other
platforms/browsers are an unknown quantity to me.

For comparison, the original site is (still supposed to be) at:
	http://www.fortunecity.com/marina/dolphin/124/socom.htm

Once again, this is my first commercial project, so all input on the
project would be gratefully accepted. Many thanks in advance.

Roger

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