Re: Harsh criticism needed

by John Garside <jqg(at)pc.dk>

Date:	Tue, 11 Jan 2005 11:31:00 +0100
To:	hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
In-Reply-To:	louisville
	todo: View Thread, Original

At around 11:11 10-01-2005 -0500, Dennis J Keibler wrote, in part -->>
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>The sentence that says, "We then prepare the detailed programme and agree 
>dates etc. for delivery" should be re-evaluated. Since one of the selling 
>points is quality, any grammatical or typographical errors are serious flaws.


Many thanks to all who gave their time to comment.


Just two things stopped me from getting a perfect night's sleep:

1. Why wasn't Sev given a message that Flash was required?

2. What are the grammatical or typographical errors in the sentence Dennis 
quoted above?


Best,

john g

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