Please give me comments on my site!

http://www.clarityconnect.com/webpages3/davidnard/home.html
Hello,


After many a sleepless night and hours during study halls, I'm finally
putting the finishing touches on my website, Sollertia. I just turned 16,
and this is going to be (hopefully) my source of income for a while once I
get it started. The 'about' page is not fully completed, and the 'services'
and 'samples' pages are totally blank, but I'd like to know what people
think about the basic site design and layout. 95% of the code was done in
notepad, with a little cutting and pasting from Aftershock. My biggest
problem right now is getting the page html 4.0 validated--those darned
shockwave attributes get it every time! Anyone have any suggestions on the
code side also?

Thanks much!
David Nard
davidnard(at)clarityconnect.com
http://www.clarityconnect.com/webpages3/davidnard/home.html
ps-hoping to get my own domain soon!

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