Critique, Please

Hi Guys:

Okay, here ya go.

First, thanks to all who gave me private critiques yesterday. I incorporated
many of your recommendations.

Everyone, please go to: http://www.starrwolf.com and give it the go.

I hope you like what you see because it incorporates a TON of your
recommendations from last time. The biggest thing you'll notice is I have my
own domain now (thanks to Craig's guidance).

I ran it through IE4 @ on 3 resolutions and it looked good. I used 56k modem
@ 44,000 bps and load time whizzed.

However, the image map took 38 seconds to load @ 37, 333 bps  and I'm
concerned about viewers using 33's. I am open to speed suggestions.

The site was made using Homesite 4 and every image on the website was sliced
using the Ulead SmartSaver Pro and saved in GIF format including each
section of the image map. So, if you know of a way to speed it up please
tell me.

Now, one word before you jump on me about validation ... I have validated a
majority of the coding, however, I am saving final validation for AFTER you
guys critique it and I make whatever tweeks I might based upon your
recommendations. So, please rest assured I will run it through the W3C
validator before going "live".

For those who don't know me, I am a 16 year old web design newcomer and this
is my first attempt at a "strictly" business site. What you'll see is going
to be my design business site and I'm trying to go "live" with it on New
Year's Day.

Thanks guys ...... LMK what y'all think!!

Ms. Starr

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