Re: Second attempt: Commercial critique on site facelift, please

Hi Roger
Site looks OK except links are slow loading and why did you change the BG on
the Kent commando site
Robert
----- Original Message -----
From: Roger Stenning <roger(at)isgwds.enterprise-plc.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
Sent: Tuesday, December 14, 1999 2:29 PM
Subject: Second attempt: Commercial critique on site facelift, please


> Hi.
>
> My first request appears to have fallen on deaf ears, so I'm making a
second
> attempt!
>
> About nine months ago, I asked for, and received, some very helpful
critique
> from the august membership of this list, which was much appreciated.
>
> I've now been asked to give a facelift to the main part of their site,
which
> is their main earner: The Airsoft games side of their operation.
>
> I'd appreciate any and all comments about this part of the site, which is
> currently residing on my server, at:
> http://homepages.enterprise.net/isgwds00000/socom-new/index.html.
>
> SOCOM is the part of the site that has been updated. The old version is
at:
> http://www.ringwould.freeserve.co.uk/index.html.
>
> The links will lead you to their splash page. Click on the SOCOM link in
> both cases. The KCL area has *not* been given a facelift at this time,
> although I think it's needed, to keep the overall look and feel together
> (I'm working on them for that!).
>
> I am particularly interested in:
> *   Loading time
> *   Cross-browser compatibility under HTML3.2
> *   JavaScript issues arising from the rollovers
> *   Overall layout issues - is the layout getting the message across, and
>      can it be improved, somehow?
> *   Spelling foul-ups - have I missed anything (Note: UK English is
>      used)?
>
> Many thanks in advance,
>
> Best regards for the silly season <grin>,
>
> Roger Stenning
> Intelligent Web Design Services
>     http://iws.n3.net/
> Contact me for my PGP Public Key.
>
> Webmaster for the Impossible Scenarios Group
>     http://www.the-isg.co.uk/index.html
>
>
>

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