Second attempt: Commercial critique on site facelift, please

by "Roger Stenning" <roger(at)isgwds.enterprise-plc.com>

 Date:  Tue, 14 Dec 1999 19:29:48 -0000
 To:  <hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org>
  todo: View Thread, Original
Hi.

My first request appears to have fallen on deaf ears, so I'm making a second
attempt!

About nine months ago, I asked for, and received, some very helpful critique
from the august membership of this list, which was much appreciated.

I've now been asked to give a facelift to the main part of their site, which
is their main earner: The Airsoft games side of their operation.

I'd appreciate any and all comments about this part of the site, which is
currently residing on my server, at:
http://homepages.enterprise.net/isgwds00000/socom-new/index.html.

SOCOM is the part of the site that has been updated. The old version is at:
http://www.ringwould.freeserve.co.uk/index.html.

The links will lead you to their splash page. Click on the SOCOM link in
both cases. The KCL area has *not* been given a facelift at this time,
although I think it's needed, to keep the overall look and feel together
(I'm working on them for that!).

I am particularly interested in:
*   Loading time
*   Cross-browser compatibility under HTML3.2
*   JavaScript issues arising from the rollovers
*   Overall layout issues - is the layout getting the message across, and
     can it be improved, somehow?
*   Spelling foul-ups - have I missed anything (Note: UK English is
     used)?

Many thanks in advance,

Best regards for the silly season <grin>,

Roger Stenning
Intelligent Web Design Services
    http://iws.n3.net/
Contact me for my PGP Public Key.

Webmaster for the Impossible Scenarios Group
    http://www.the-isg.co.uk/index.html

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