Second attempt: Commercial critique on site facelift, please
by "Roger Stenning" <roger(at)isgwds.enterprise-plc.com>
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Hi.
My first request appears to have fallen on deaf ears, so I'm making a second
attempt!
About nine months ago, I asked for, and received, some very helpful critique
from the august membership of this list, which was much appreciated.
I've now been asked to give a facelift to the main part of their site, which
is their main earner: The Airsoft games side of their operation.
I'd appreciate any and all comments about this part of the site, which is
currently residing on my server, at:
http://homepages.enterprise.net/isgwds00000/socom-new/index.html.
SOCOM is the part of the site that has been updated. The old version is at:
http://www.ringwould.freeserve.co.uk/index.html.
The links will lead you to their splash page. Click on the SOCOM link in
both cases. The KCL area has *not* been given a facelift at this time,
although I think it's needed, to keep the overall look and feel together
(I'm working on them for that!).
I am particularly interested in:
* Loading time
* Cross-browser compatibility under HTML3.2
* JavaScript issues arising from the rollovers
* Overall layout issues - is the layout getting the message across, and
can it be improved, somehow?
* Spelling foul-ups - have I missed anything (Note: UK English is
used)?
Many thanks in advance,
Best regards for the silly season <grin>,
Roger Stenning
Intelligent Web Design Services
http://iws.n3.net/
Contact me for my PGP Public Key.
Webmaster for the Impossible Scenarios Group
http://www.the-isg.co.uk/index.html
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