Re: Critique of http://www.foreverteddybears.com/

Hi Nancy
MSIE 5.0 800X600 win98 connected at 44k
I agree mostly with what Tamara had to say
I feel the opening page is cluttered and too long  "too much scrolling"
The pop up page is very annoying
the theme of the site does not fit the domain name
Good Luck
robert1
----- Original Message ----- 
From: Nancy Whittley <jnwhittley(at)fuse.net>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Saturday, August 19, 2000 3:58 PM
Subject: Critique of http://www.foreverteddybears.com/


> Critique request of "Retail Online Store".  
> I am looking for a critique of  http://www.foreverteddybears.com/
> 
> What I am looking for is:
> 
> 1. Is navigation clear or confusing?
> 2. Is there scrolling and at what resolution?  ( I know there is some)
> 3. What do you see wrong with the site, in other words what could
> we do to improve it?
> 4. Would you buy from here? If not why?
> 5. What would help trigger that purchase mode in folks?
> 
> Sales at this site are just not happening and we are trying to figure
> out why?  I have other shops that are doing fine, but this one
> is constantly updated and gets fresh products periodically,
> and still  no sales.   What recommendations do you have?
> 
> Thank you in advance.
> 
> Sincerely,
> 
> Nancy 
> 
> 

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