Re: Please review www.edenflowers.co.nz

Hi Richard,

A nice-looking site.  Here are some minor points I noticed:

The logo on the main page jumps upwards as the page loads.  I think this
might be because the CSS gives it a 190px height but the HTML gives it a
180px height.

You use a different phone number format on the Contact page than the
main page; might as well be consistent.  If you're going to use a dash
like on the main page, I think having no spaces on either side would
make it slightly more readable.

For the list of arrangements, you might want to be consistent with
capitalization -- decide between sentence case and title case.  Also, I
think "new born" should be one word (in US English at least).

One other thing is that I think text usually looks a little better (more
professional) and is a little more readable when it's left-aligned.

Otherwise, nice job.

Stephanie


> I'd appreciate some opinions on www.edenflowers.co.nz. It's a full CSS
site
> that breaks in older browsers, but I'm working on alternatives so we
don't
> need to go there. It seems to work fine on IE6, NN6 and Opera6.
>
> The graphics are still a little slow, also some of the flower
descriptions
> and alt text is still to be completed.

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