Re: Please review www.edenflowers.co.nz

Richard I'll just jot notes as I wander.

IE6 (text size "smaller")
800x600
Win2000Prof

I consider Times a poor choice in text body (bottom of home page). Serif 
just doesn't display as clearly on screen as sans-serif. Also considering 
how much Times has been used choosing another font helps give your site a 
fresher look and feel. I'd also suggest letter-spacing at .1em or .2em to 
make the smaller text easier to read. That also helps develop a fresher look.

It's an interesting logo but with such a visual product why aren't we 
showcasing it in some way on the home page. Given the exciting visual 
displays they create with their products... this home page is rather bland.

This style of navigation button has been done too often.

Format the look and feel of the map page so appears the same as all the others.

All that white space in Promotions leaves me wondering what information is 
missing.

Email link in contact should look the same (bold) as all the other links.

Some information such as an email address is so intuitive that labeling it 
is silly.

out of time
Steve
www.thewebguy.ca

At 06:52 AM 11/30/2002 +1300,
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