We would like any comments you may have regarding our new church site at:

http://www.webimpressions.net/test/pog

It is still rough around the edges and we have several loose ends to tie up,
so we are aware that there are still some broken links and such. We would
basically like comments on layout, colors, navigation and let us know your
browser/version/screen res so we can troubleshoot any compatibility
problems.

TIA!

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Laurie Harper
WWWeb Impressions, LLC
10095 Hickman CT Suite 6
Clive, IA 50325
(515)334-9638
http://www.webimpressions.net
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-----Original Message-----
From: owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org [mailto:owner-hwg-critique(at)hwg.org]On
Behalf Of Susan Lewis
Sent: Tuesday, March 30, 1999 1:03 PM
To: hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
Subject: Re: New Home




Hi Carol,


I finally found some time and took a look at your website
http://www.cbwdesign.com.  I'm using MSIE 4.0, 640x480, 17 inch screen and
33.6 modem speed.

I was immediately impressed with the speed that your site loaded.  Also,
while I don't advocate splash pages myself, you did provide a comprehensive
navigational list and your graphic loaded fast enough that I was not
"compelled" to click away.

On your portfolio page, I note that you don't have any of your graphics
showing up.  Did you forget to post them on your server?  <VBG>  Also, have
you thought of providing a link to your clients' websites so visitors can go
and take a look?  You could do this by bringing up a new screen and thus not
"lose" your viewer while they take a look.

Your Paint Shop Pro page is nicely done; likewise the Tutorial page.  Some
nice choices on your books.

I have just one tiny "complaint" and that has to do with your choice of
words in Item #4 under "Advil".  Being a graphic designer myself, I cringe
when I see any suggestion about "stealing" graphics.  Perhaps you could come
up with another word?  Maybe "...found some free graphics to place on ...
blah blah blah".

Anyhoo -- I did enjoy wandering through your pages.  All are nicely done
with lots of space which makes them easy to read.

Good luck!

Susan E. Lewis
Full Circle Associates
http://fullcircleassociates.simplenet.com
Place the "full circle" of your web and
graphics designs in our capable hands.

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