Re: Business Site Re-critique

> Hi --
>
>  I finally got enough time to finish implementing the changes from the
>last time I had people critique this, so if you have a few minutes, could
>you re-critique my website at http://www.adarknight.com ?
>  Please comment on
>
>  1. Navigation
>  2. Layout
>  3. Load Times
>
>  And as always, please include your screen res, color depth (if known),
>OS, connection speed, and the browser you were using.  The pages validated,
>so there shouldn't be any problems with strange things happening in
>different browsers, but you never know...
>
> Thanks,
>
>    Jesse Pate

Hello Jesse,

        I have just a few comments and more of a personal feel than
anything.
First load time was good and all in all all looked good just as stated a few
comments.

1) If it where I I would not make the text so large, not the font but the
width of screen usage. If it where around say 70% of the screen it would
read easier than total screen.

2) On the submit page you ask if you have a page and want it updated. Would
it not help matters and/or speed up your reply to the customer if you
allowed a HTTP input on the form. You could then view the existing site and
over constructive thought before contact possible client.

3) This one is personal and just do not agree with others. I do a lot of
designs for people and companies. I do not have a price guide on my pages. I
do have "Contact Dragon Works for your free Estimate". I found a price guide
cuts off more than it brings in..

        Again all in all looked good, just a few maybes here to improve...

Ben

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