I just visited the site.  On your home page I found the bolded red type
easy to read.  However, when I visited the next level down (Readings?),
the non-bolded red type was very difficult.  You may want to consider
more contrast between the type and the background color.

Whereas, personally, I do not enjoy light type on dark background, your
bolding of the type somewhat alleviated that problem.

> -----Original Message-----
> From:	sosb [SMTP:mugidesu(at)earthlink.net]
> Sent:	Tuesday, December 09, 1997 3:43 PM
> To:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
> Subject:	For review (commercial, but non-profit)
> 
> Hello list members. I would like to submit a site for review, the URL
> is:
> 
> http://www.tdphoto.com/test/index.html
> 
> This site is nearly finished, the underlying articles are not in place
> yet, but those are not really of concern. The Japanese content is also
> not finished being translated, but you will not need that anyway. If
> you
> should experience graphics not properly lining up, please tell me what
> browser and version you are using. It has been viewed successfully in
> NN3.01 - 4.04 and IE3.0 - 4.0. Thank you all for your time.
> 
> P.S. Image width, height, and alt attributes are currently being
> added,
> so no need to mention that, thanks.
> 
> Cheers.
> ______________________________________________________________________
> sean otis spann barley                           Artwerks Design Group
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