Re: Commercial critique please

by "Lynnsey Skliros" <skliro_l(at)mtn.co.za>

Date:	Fri, 21 Aug 1998 18:05:18 +0200
To:	rjashley(at)ameritech.net, hwg-critique(at)mail.hwg.org
References:	ameritech
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Hi Bobbi,

The home page:

Interesting design! It may look nicer on a white background. There's a gap
between the third blue blob and its branch. It also looks as though the
branches are not all quite the right length and the blobs don't follow the
straight line I was expecting them to.

The text (as well as the blobs) should be linked to the other pages - it's
natural to click on them and annoying when nothing happens.

Unfortunately I didn't have time to look at anything else, hope this
helps. I will re-review on Monday if I have time.

Lynnsey

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On 8/19/98, at 12:48 PM, Bobbi Ashley wrote: 

>http://www.healthtechnologies.com/magnets/magnets.html
>
>Bobbi

Lynnsey Skliros
Mobile Telephone Networks

The mind of the bigot is like the pupil of the eye; the more light you
pour upon it, the more it will contract. -- Oliver Wendell Holmes

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