Hi Jenny,

> I am an HTML II student and part of our assignment is to get our site
> critiqued. Please see my site at:

Mozilla 1.4a+ (nightly) on Windows 2KSP3 with a browser window of 
about 1000x1000, 32bit colour and a LAN connection.

Overall a nice simple, informative site.  You may want to restrict 
the width of the text for larger screen resolutions since long lines 
can be difficult to read (either use a table or put large margins on 
the paragraphs, maybe about 10% or so).  I like what you've done with 
the images, especially some of the soft edges and overlays.

I think that the homepage is a bit bare, though.  You could maybe put 
the navigation bar down the side or something and possibly add some 
more pictures of the area to liven it up a bit.

HTH,
Raj.

-- 
Rajnish Bhaskar, r.bhaskar(at)compserv.gla.ac.uk
http://lordofthemoon.com

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