RE: Critique Request: http://www.deakgroup.com/update/

Bachelor's degree in English but tainted by several years in journalism.

Something, something and something is fine according to the last MLA I saw 
(o.k., it's been awhile, I admit), but something, something, and something 
used to be correct. Now if you have something went here, something else 
here, and then one last something that would be correct comma placement.

But, perhaps my memory is fading??

Tamara

At 10:33 AM 10/24/00 -0800, Webmaster, Aurora Web Design wrote:
>English major here - I would go with original comma placement. But
>I would not say that my opinion should settle anything - there
>being such a thing as "poetic license" as well as "rules are made
>to be broken." Also, there may be a difference between some rules
>of British grammar and the same ones of American grammar (I am
>American).
>
> > Subject: Re: Critique Request: http://www.deakgroup.com/update/
> > This is a little OT, but I have a third idea about
> > comment placement--that
> > it should read
> > ...offers teachers, administrators and parents a
> > comprehensive array...
> >
> > Is there an English major who can settle this?
> >
> > Stephanie
> >
> > > One more thing--not meaning any offense, Pat--but the
> > > grammar (comma placements) on the front page is
> > > correct. --Susan
> >

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