Re: Fishing Site (Please Critique)

Looks pretty good, a little plain but then you did say
pics were going to be added.

I choose the frames version as it's my personal pref.

2 Things about the frames tho, the backgrounds don't match
up completely leaving a noticeable line and 2nd you should
have the content background part fixed in place.

ie. style="background: url(background_name.jpg) fixed"

On the contact page the email address is a light green color
and very hard to read. You also have "HowTo..." instead of
"How To..." for the title.

On the rates page you need a space between "OurReasonable..."
Forth bullet has "...it is best to reserver..."

On the Supplies page 3rd bullet should be "You're welcome.."
5th bullet... sub bullet has "pleease..."

Our services, 5th bullet accomindations should be accommodations

That's about all I could spot.


At 12:04 AM 21/08/2000 -0500, The Lion's Cub wrote:
>http://users.elknet.net/lionscub/Steve_Slutsky/
>
>I am designing a site for a friend that got ripped off big time by someone
>who charged him and then delivered junk.  Would appreciate some helpful
>critiques before I release the site to him.  A couple of things to keep in
>mind.

.oOo.
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