+ very appealing graphic layout
+ good idea to put the 'news' in a small window on the left on the main
page
+ good navigation
- the slogan 'the ride you've been waiting for' repeats for both
motorcycles and ATVs
- on the 'company' page, there's an extra comma: "company, comprised"
* dealers - it might be good to include their merchandise on their address
page (i.e. motorcycles, ATVs etc.), although people would probably know it
if they seacrh a dealer by this topic - but it might be good to know, e.g.
that this guy sells marine as well and I don't have to search for marine
dealer as well, once I found it through bikes.
* is it necessary to repeat the legal clause ('All contents of this
website...') on each single page? Maybe yes, if your attorneys say so; but
it seems to me that sometimes it takes up too much space compred to other
content.
Overall, I think they gave this job to the right person!
If you'd look at and critique my site, I would really appreciate it. It's
just a personal one, though, so don't expect anything comparable. Thanks.
Jiri Matejicek
http://www.geocities.com/SoHo/Studios/2165

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