Hi Carol,

My initial impression is that this site is coming along very well.  It has a friendly, yet professional 
appearance.  My suggestion would be to move the text, ever so slightly, to the right, so that it is more in line 
with the images.  The logo information in the upper right corner, IMHO, should also be moved in a bit, so that 
it isn't hanging onto the edge of the border.  I would also suggest a bit of text editing, too. For example, 
they have written:  

"We do not believe in ?One size fits all.? We will work with you to design a program to fit you now and to be 
flexible in the future. To grow as your family or business grows."

You might ask them to consider rephrasing this. For example:

"We do not believe in 'One size fits all.' With your help, we will design an insurance program to meet the needs 
of your family now and into the future."

Oops, almost forgot this:

OS: WinXP Pro
Browser: Opera 6.05
Screen Res: 1024x768
Connection: DSL 

HTH,

Carole


11/21/2002 4:36:32 PM, "Carol Parent" <cbwd(at)means.net> wrote:

>Hello,
>
>No alt tags, code needs to be cleaned up.  Copyright is still on photos
>BUT....
>
>:)
>
>Can you all give me your 'first impressions' on this one-page site?
>
>http://www.gisnemn.com/draft.html
>
>Thanks much.
>
>Best regards,
>
>Carol Parent
>info(at)tecminn.com
>http://www.tecminn.com
>
>I finally got it all together...
>I just wish I could remember where I set it down.
>
>
Carole Gay

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