Re: Personal Web Page Critique

by "Michael B. Clark" <mclark(at)homemail.com>

Date:	Thu, 18 Dec 1997 13:02:09 -0500
To:	hwg-critique(at)hwg.org
Cc:	"Ian Potts" <ipotts(at)pacinfo.com>
In-Reply-To:	ianpotts
	todo: View Thread, Original

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Hello Ian,

1. On the main page, you mention the page was last updated on 
December 15, 1997. The next line says "the time is:". Is this the 
time of the last update, or the current time? 

2. On aboutme.html "Internet" was misspelled as "Intrenet".

3. On work.html, the link to Projects did not work.

4. Validate your pages. For more information check out 
http://www.hwg.org/resources/useful.html#2.0 .

5. Overall, a very clean looking site. No complaints with the speed 
or graphics.

Viewed/surfed with:  Netscape Navigator 3.0 Gold; 28.8 modem; Windows 

95; 800x600x256 colors; java and javascript turned off.

I hope that helps. Good luck. Michael

At 10:50 PM 12/17/97 -0800, you wrote:
>Well I have finally come very close to finishing the remodeling of 
my
>personal webpage at http://www.pacinfo.com/~ipotts/   I would really
>appreciate some feedback about my site.  Please take a look if you 
have a
>chance and give me a reply!  Thanks again
>
>Ian Potts - ipotts(at)pacinfo.com

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