RE: Critique Hypoglycemia Site

by "Mike Eovino" <meovino(at)erols.com>

Date:	Wed, 21 Apr 1999 08:35:44 -0400
To:	"Lindsey Milton" <poof(at)photobooks.com>, <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
In-Reply-To:	photobooks
	todo: View Thread, Original

> 1. Should I correct the typos in the "Personal Touch" section? These are
> the way the postings came to me.. and I was wondering whether I
> should edit
> them or leave them be..

Definitely leave them as is.  It lends an air of authenticity to the quotes.
We all know that, despite our best efforts, not all of our posts are a model
of grammatical perfection.

>
> 2. Any ideas on sprucing up the page? There aren't many graphics
> associated
> with this topic.. so I chose an open book motif..

I'm something of a minimalist, so I like the look.

Overall, I think the site looks great.  You can see seams around your
navigation graphics, you might want to try them as transparent GIF's instead
of JPEG's.  Also, you can keep them if you decide to change your background
image.

I run my display at a pretty high resolution, and the text on the message
board was a little bit small, but this is probably fine at 800x600 and is ok
when I set my fonts to largest.

On a personal note, I used to date a woman with hypoglycemia, and I wish I
had a resource like this to help me understand what she was going through.

HTH

Mike Eovino
Webmaster
Estes Express Lines

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