Re: Critique My Site Please
by "Kim Mitchell" <kim(at)who-knows.com>
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Renie,
I'm pretty new at this and so won't have a whole lot of comments.
First, overall I really like the layout of the site. It is clear and easy to
navigate in my opinion and looks well-planned.
The two things I would change are:
On the front page, the animated text is just too gimmicky for a site that
needs to be conservative. You already have something 'unusal' with the
vibrant colors on black, and I found myself watching the 'effect' and not
remembering what the words in the effect said.
Second, the blue you are using needs to be brightened up. I have a decent
monitor and can hardly read it. One of my clients has a pretty cruddy
monitor and I know he'd never be able to decipher what it says. I think
you need to mix in a bit of red and green to brighten up the overall shade.
These are just my opinion.
Good luck and best regards,
Kim
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Kimberley Mitchell (732) 750-1941
Member: HTML Writers Guild kim(at)mighty-sites.com
Mighty Sites Web Design http://www.mighty-sites.com
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----- Original Message -----
From: Donald <donald(at)artgarfunkel.com>
To: <hwg-critique(at)hwg.org>
Sent: Wednesday, October 13, 1999 6:58 PM
Subject: Critique My Site Please
> I would appreciate feedback on this site: www.leeannemorgan.com. It is
my
> first 'paying' client. Please note that the color/font selection is the
> client's. Any and all comments are welcome.
>
> I've really enjoyed reading prior 'critiques' and have learned alot from
> other comments.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Renie
>
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